This is a short love story. In a sunny and lovely day a young girl, Josepha, and a man, Ben, met accidently in the bus. After that they start talking and seeing each other and to cut a long story short they fell in love. The young girl was living in a fairy tale; she was absolutely in love with him. However, one day Josepha realized that something wasn’t right. Ben stopped answering her phone calls and when she asked him what was happening he was always changing the subject. So she decided to follow him and she discovered that he was married. Her heart was broken. Ben was a full deception for her, not only because he was a unscrupulous person, but also due to his erratic behavior. Josepha went insane and was planning her revenge.
One day she took him for a ride in a green and beautiful field. Ben was really gullible to think that ride was a simple… ride. When they arrived to the green field, Josepha took the gun in her pocket and pointed to Ben. She was about to pull the trigger when he realized what was really going on. Ben begged her for forgiven, but she didn’t listened and without thinking twice killed him.
Josepha looked one last time to Ben and after that she leaved the scene of the crime, swearing never fall for anyone again.
By: Ana Rute Cardoso and Sara Ramos
What a tragic story! But it's well structured, just keeping the most important informations.
ReplyDeleteWe could probably expect a little twist at the end, but the assassination ending makes it more acrid. Well, I liked it, good job!