Once upon a
time, there was a little girl called Jamie, she was born with a problem on her
nose, it was crooked, because when she was younger she tripped over the kerb. Jamie
was always teased by her friends at school. She was known as Pinocchio and at
home her parents also didn’t help. For many years she asked her parents to have
a plastic surgery, but every time she asked for it, her parents always said
that she was beautiful in her own way, and in God’s eyes.
On her 13th
birthday, she began to have an erratic behavior, treating her few friends very
badly! She used to think that time healed everything but as she was extremely
gullible, she started planning her suicide. However when Jamie was about to
swallow the pills, her parents, who were taken for a ride, were back, and as
she heard their voices, she decided she would live up to see her older
brother’s graduation. (She didn’t want her brother to think she saw him as
deception, strictly speaking.) And quickly she refused point blank! Two years
later, Jamie began to be more confident, and she was a slick young woman
Maria and Cristiana
It was a nice story, but I didn't understand one part. In the beginning you say that she was born with a crooked nose but then you say that it was because she tripped over a kerb.
ReplyDeleteCatarina M.
I had the same problem as Catarina. And I couln´t understand the sentence "She didn´t want her brother to think she saw him as deception, stricktly speaking."
ReplyDeleteThe story is about the individual beauty of every person. I like this basic idea of your story.